Whispered Death

This is not how I’m feeling at the moment, promise, just something I thought I would dabble in 🙂

Enjoy!


Vultures circle

Whispering in my ear

Can’t stop myself from being able to hear

As their lies truthful statements from on high come and on me hurdle

 

You’re ugly

You’re stupid

You went too far

You can’t say anything intelligent

 

Shut up and get out of my head

But it’s the truth

But people—-

They’re just pretending to make you feel better

 

You’re a burden

They’re just too polite to tell you

Everything you do is wrong

The fact that you deny it proves how stupid you are

 

Out of my head

Just kill yourself…but then again, who would even care?

It’s just lies, this is not true

See? Dumb. You refuse to see the simple truth.

 

Maybe you’re right.

Cause I don’t know what’s real anymore.


This is a very real issue many people deal with – especially people who have depression and Anxiety Disorders. Don’t take it lightly – it’s a real issue ESPECIALLY for depressed people or those who are suicidal (and being suicidal often goes hand in hand with being depressed).

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23 responses to “Whispered Death”

  1. I’m so glad you aren’t feeling that way!👍😊

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  2. Yes, Racheal. These are the most precise voices heard by the people who kill themselves. You have articulated it so well. I hope many will seek doctors help and be saved. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Yeah, it’s a very serious thing, something I think people need to be more aware of and take more seriously. I’m sick and tired of people brushing it off as if it’s nothing!!!!!

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      1. It is indeed a dangerous phenomenon. Ideally people with suicidal thoughts need immediate assistance to prevent harm to this person. They need admission to a Health care facility.

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      2. A health care facility and prayer. They also need to know that someone cares about them.

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      3. Yes, we need prayers and treatment as well. Prayers are equally important. Treatment is most important.

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  3. Well written, Racheal. Very dark.. but sadly so relevant these days. 😦

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    1. Thank you.
      I know it’s dark, but it does happen and as you said so relevant for these days. We all need to be aware of it more.

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    CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN!

    You are too good at these Racheal❤

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      1. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! Avatar
        CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN!

        No prob!

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  5. You have expressed it well Rachael. This subject is taboo for many, but it’s a sad reality.
    Happy that you are ok 😊

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    1. Thank you. Yep, agreed.
      Me too 😊

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  6. You’ve portrayed the struggle quite well.
    (Side note: There are a few typos there that detract from the piece a little)

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    1. Thanks.
      (Oh, shit! I’ll go back and correct them, thank you for letting me know)

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    2. And they have been corrected…at least, I think I got all of them, lol

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