What is this that I am feeling
Why are my walls shaking
And breaking
And what is this that I feel I am needing?
Is it you?
Is it me?
I look you in the eyes
And there’s something there that I can’t deny
A spark
A connection
An understanding of each other
With just a simple glance
My walls break down
They shatter
For once I actually feel sound
While listening to the sounds of your laughter
Your touch makes me want to share everything
Hide nothing
Your embrace makes me feel safe and warm
During a terrible storm
I want to tell you
See if there’s more to explore, something more we could share
But…
Do you even feel the same?
Do you feel the same?
The same oneness as I do?
The same spark?
Or do you just see a good friend?
Nothing more?
It’s there, I can’t deny
I can no longer run and hide
But if I say something, will I cause unnecessary strife?
And make the biggest mistake of my life?
So, I know this is Ugh! but I wanted to try a romantic poem instead of my usual dark ones…but it’s clear that when it comes to poetry, I’m more fitted for writing dark, gritty stuff then soppy romance.
Ah, well. I gave it a shot.
Hope you enjoyed it!
Have a great day/night!
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Wow, this is amazingly so romantic. You nailed it perfectly. 👌 You are a born writer Racheal 🤝
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Wow, really? It was good?
And thanks 🙂
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I am telling you the truth Racheal. Ask any romantic guy. 😃
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That’s…that’s awesome!!!!!! Can’t believe that I got it right!!!
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You got it precisely. ☝️
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Awesome! Thank you!
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You are most welcome Racheal. Continue writing similar things. Have you read song of Solomon, it’s similar to that.
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Yeah, I’ve read Songs of Solomon.
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Great. Keep it up dear friend.
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Will do.
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🤝
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👏👏👏
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Thanks!
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That is so heartfelt💖💖💖 LOVED IT RACHAEL😍
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Really? I’m surprised at the positive reaction to this – I didn’t think it was THAT good!
Thanks.
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YEAH it really was! No prob!
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Cool! Thanks!
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Any time!!!
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BTW, with regards to that song challenge you gave me, I’m finding it difficult to sing If Only and am going to change the song to “Tightrope” from the movie The Greatest Showman. Just so you know 🙂 and sorry I couldn’t sing the song you wanted.
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No problem Racheal! You can totally sing whatever sing you like! I always love them😃😄
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Thanks!
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No problem!
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That was great!! More of these, please.
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Thanks!
Honestly, I’m flabbergasted at how much everyone loves this as I didn’t think I had written it very well.
I’ll try to write more positive poems, then 🙂
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It’s great!
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Cool! I take it you like it more than my dark poetry?
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UHHHHHH YEAH!!!!!!!!
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LOL! I’ll make a note of that.
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Awesome sauce
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I’ve been challenged to sing a song.
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Uh oh. By who?
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Shahashel.
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Oh my. Who knows what she suggested
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If Only from something called Descendants. It’s a good song.
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Cool
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Excellent Racheal. I so enjoyed this heart felt poetry. Keep it coming my dear. You are amazing.
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Thank you! I will.
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Hi Rachael
My name is Maryam, you have a very interesting blog
You should check out my blog
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It’s EAL not AEL
And hi! Will do at some point when I can.
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Sorry about disturbing you
And anyway my blog isn’t really good 😔
So I really don’t deserve alot of followers
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Look in my experience, people who tend to talk like you are doing right now are trying to guilt trip into checking out and following their blogs.
You’ve asked me to, so I will – at some point, as I lead a very busy life.
But don’t try and push it or I won’t.
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Sorry😔
Look I am not forcing you
You always have a choice
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Okay, thank you.
I did get a chance to check out your blog. It’s awesome and quite interesting 🙂
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Thanks🙂
Your blog is nice as well
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You’re welcome 🙂
Thanks
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I think its neat to see you write this
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Thank you 🙂
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You are welcome
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